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Very nice! :) I really liked the theme and the style, I it a very good piece of work. I be waiting for more!

The shortness of the poem really worked for me. I really liked the theme. Very interesting. :)

Very sad. It was kind of shallow though. :? But moreover, I liked it. It was a good story. :)

A lot of repeating. But the overall story was good. I liked it. :? :)

Nice POEM (at least I know its a poem :lol: ) It was OK. It had some good parts in it, but something just didn't give it any edge. :?

No replies, thats no fun. I'll change that for you. :lol: It was good. I liked the description, but the size was a little to small. other than that, I ...

Not long enough. It was a little weird, and some of the stanzas didn't make since. :? :)

Very nice. Only a few typos, and other than that, I was fine. 8)

Very good. I love Naruto/Shippuuden, and this was a really good story. Waiting to read more. :)

Very strange, but in a good way. Sounded weird, but I suck at poetry, so don't mind me! :lol:

Firestarter point exactly. It was good overall, but some of the lines didn't seem to hit. :?

Very original and creative. I was cool and interesting and I kept wanting to read more after I was finished. Nice job. :)

I don't really have anything to say. :? I was pretty good, nice and short, but something just didn't hit it off for me. Keep up the good work.

I'm like Ink hear. I wish I could give you some pointers, but I suck at poetry. Sorry, but I liked it. :) :?

Great work. The format is cool, and it was short and to the point! :) Liked It.